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Post by Kiara on Jul 13, 2007 22:52:13 GMT -5
Chapter one!
Simba and kovu padded along a small creek silently. It was morning, the air smelt like a steal scent of out sider. Kovu stared at simba and smiled. Simba stared back and nodded as they padded up to pride rock graffiki stood quietly. He smiled at kovu and then walked up the rock with simba and kovu. Animals stood under the rock as they made noise and ruckuss. "Kovu." said a soft voice. Kovu turned around and smiled Kiara lay on the ground with three cubs, Kimba, star, and kishu. two males and a female. Kovu smiled and then nugged kiara with his muzzel as graffiki grabed Kishu the next choosen king after simba, and kovu. He held kishu up as the sun shone on kishus pelt. He mewed and then he stared at the animals below him. Kiara walked silently up to the tip of the rock with Kovu and Kovu roared in happiness as the sun began to shine on his son.
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Post by Nala on Jul 14, 2007 15:24:32 GMT -5
Good! Keep writing!
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Post by Sandy on Aug 10, 2007 17:20:29 GMT -5
It's really good Kiara!
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